Wednesday, October 8, 2008

BEOWULF'S BRAVERY


BEOWULF STRONG AND THE STRONGEST
THE BAVEST AND BEST OF THE GEATS
HEARD HOW GRENDEL FILLED NIGHTS WITH HORROR
WOULD SAIL ACROSS THE SEA TO HROTHGAR
BEOWULF AROSE, WITH HIS MEN AROUND HIM
ALONG UNDER HEROT'S STEEP ROOF INTO HROTHGAR
STANDING ON THAT PRINCE'S OWN HEART,HELMETED
THE SILVERY METAL OF HIS MAIL SHIRT
GLEAMING WITH A SMITH'S HIGH ART
DEATH WAS MY ERRAND AND FATE THEY HAD EARNED
SMEAR TORN SCRAPS OF OUR SKINS
ON THE WALLS OF HIS DEN. WILL FRET
ABOUT SEWING OUR SHROUDS, IF HE WINS.
IF DEATH DOES TAKE ME SEND THE
HAMMERED MAIL OF MY ARMOR TO HIGLAC.


7 comments:

Jesus said...

I like, Love and also edmire. The strong literature and voice that you used in the poem. Keep up the good work and I will seriously admire this peom.

joel said...

orale home gurl esta chido tu poem..lol
well i like how u talk about beowulf and how u mostly came up with the words not from the txt.
koo i like

CAR0LINA`S PRiNC3SS W0RLD said...

H3Y WiF3Y! i L0V3 THiS P03M THAT U HAV3 CR3AT3D. iT R3ALLY SH0WS TH3 BRAV3RY 0F B30WULF. AND TH3 ACTi0NS THAT T00K HiM T0 B3 H0N0R3D. G00D J0B! S33 U SAiD THAT U C0ULDN`T AND U DiD iT! YAY!
L0V3 U
-CHAPARRiTA-

Gl0RiA AkA C00KiE said...

sounds good.. excellent job garcia!

Rangel said...

ye homegurl it sound pimpin i like how u use ur own words and didnt get it mostly from the txt like my boi pepon said good good job poem

Giovanna said...

yeah i like how u are ssaying that beowulf went there to protect the people that are living in hell cuz of grendel.... and he goes to fight him

Francisco, Rodriguez said...

I like your peom it sounds cool how you talk about Beowulf and how he saved his people. You also came up with the words yourself!